inzending: nanurudesign - Anser zoekt huisstijl

Dear Pitcher,

First of all, sorry to speak english. If you find that is problem, I do not mind to use Dutch.

Here I show you my work. I try to make the logo simple, but professional.

I hope you will like it. If there is still something, please do not hesitate to let me know, so I can improve my work.

Hope to hear from you.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Dear Pitcher,

Here is the second idea.

Please advice.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Beste Ernst,

Heb u mijn werk gezien? Kan u me een reactie geven?

Hier is mijn nieuwe logovoorstel.

Ben benieuwd wat u ervan vindt.

MVG,
Hendry

Beste Ernst,

Hier is andere logovoorstel.

Ik hoor graag van u.

MVG,
Hendry

Dear Hendry,

not quite what we like. I miss the V-shape of geese flying in formation, which is desired. Furthermore I don't like the nasa-kind of logo. The first one you submitted is the most subtile and sophisticated in means of the font, I suggest you work on that one. The last one you submitted had the geese right. So you're on the way ...
Good luck,
Ernst

Dear Ernst,

Thank you for your response.
Sorry for misunderstanding, the brief was not really clear for me, because my dutch is also not really good.

Anyway, here I show you new design. How do you find it?

Ben benieuwd wat u ervan vindt.

Groeten,
Hendry

Dear Hendry,
Great revanche. I like nr 1 and nr 4, but the font doesn't appeal to me. perhaps arial black bold e.g.?
Ernst

Dear Ernst,

Thanks for your response. Good to know that you like the 1st and 4th.

Here is the changing. Hope you will like the font now. But if there is something, please let me know so I can improve my work.

Kind regards,
Hendry

P.S. Here I show you the font variants.

Dear Ernst,

Here I show you the house-style in blue color.
Please advise.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Laatst bijgewerkt: 26-03-2010 10:13:18

Dear Ernst,

Here I show you the house-style in purple color.

Please advice.

Kind regards,
Hendry