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Dear Pitcher,

Here I try to design a new logo for your company. I hope these logos are suitable with you.

Please advice, so maybe I can improve my work.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 08:25:17

Dear Pitcher,

Here is the better colour of your logo.

Please advice.

Kind regard,
Hendry






Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 17:26:06

Dear henry,

Thanks for the designs. Look really good! I like the two bottom logo's!
1. It is nice and 'strak' and refers nicely to a factory (see below for change option).
2. You have really designed the font as well.
3.I like the fact that you create the logo and show it inverted as well. This might be usefull when creating a site afterwards.

Ad 1.
For comparison: Could you try to create more the look and feel of a house instead of the 'factory' for example by adding a roof ('puntdak') or other options? Houses for living are more our target group then office buildings etc.

Could you show some alternative colors?

Looking forward to your changes!

Laatst bijgewerkt: 31-08-2009 10:33:12

Dear Pitcher,

Thank you for your positif respond.

I am glad to know that you like my logo.

Here I to change the building with the house, and also I make the colour varians.

I hope you will like it, and hope to hear from you soon.

Kind regards,
Hendry



Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 17:26:43

Dear Pitcher,

Have you seen my new work? I hope so. Would you like please to give me your respond? So maybe I can improve my work befor make the decision.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Laatst bijgewerkt: 07-09-2009 11:13:43

Hi Soetardjo,

Have seen your new designs. Looking good but there are other strong designs as well.

We will get back to you today or tomorrow.

Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 09:36:14

Dear Hendry,

You are on our shortlist of 3.

We want to head in the direction of the last designs, the blue 'factory' to the top right.

Could you please show the following:
> Erase the lines to the top and bottom right of the text.
> Use more spacing between the letters and/or vary the font type
> Show the impact of using grey drafting and blue factory wording

Please present us your thoughts on business card and other stationary.

Looking forward to your reply!

Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 14:09:11

Dear Picther,

Here is my new design with some changing (according to you).

Please advice.

Kind regards,
Hendry



Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 15:47:14

Hi Hendry,

Looks great.
Can you show for comparison the dark blue (like the front of the building as the font color rather than lighter blue)
On the letterhead could you position the logo and blue box with contact details to the right (again, for comparison)

Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 16:09:18

Dear Pitcher,

Thank you for your reaction and advice!

I hope it is suitable with you and answerd your questions.

Please advice!

Kind regards,
Hendry



Laatst bijgewerkt: 08-09-2009 17:12:47