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Dear Pitcher,

First of all, sorry to speak english. I hope it will be no problem, but please feel free to speak dutch.

Here I show you my design. I hope you will like it.

However, if there is something, please do not hesitate to let me know, so I can improve my work.

Hope to hear from you.

Best regards,
Hendry

Dear Pitcher,

Here is black background version.

Please advise.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Dear Hendry,
Thanks for your reaction. The company name is a little bit hard to read. We think it's better if it's written in one color.

The logo is also not very unique. The round shapes are nice but we prefer to have at the most 2 bright colors and a no heavy shapes (like the black/gray stroke around the logo is).

We hope that you can work with this comments on a new version.

Best regards,

Daniel Duivestein

Dear Daniel,

Here is the new version.
Hope you will like it. However, if there is still something, please do not hesitate to let me know.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Dear Daniel,

Have you seen my last update? How do you find it?

Here I show you again new concept.

Please advise so I can improve my work.

Kind regards,
Hendry

Dear Pitcher,
Thanks again for your designs but they not give the feeling we want to get. We are allready happy with some logo's of other designers but you are free to send a new design and otherwise we want to thank you for your input!

best regards, Daniel